By Kim Addonizio
BOA Editions; 96 pages; $20, $12.50 paperback
The woman making your cappuccino in the cafe, the one with red lipstick, is
the ex-lover of your lover -- does she know? A man slips a quarter into the
slot in the darkened, anonymous booth to see a naked woman writhe in
pretended ecstasy before him. In a late night movie, the undead slowly
stagger back to the farmhouse ``like drunks headed home from the bar . . .
wham wham wham.''
This is Kim Addonizio's world. ``Tell Me'' is the third poetry
collection from this very San Franciscan, and too little known, poet.
Addonizio is an unlikely candidate for people's poet. With her dark hair
and delicate features, she looks kind of like Joyce Carol Oates, if Oates
should ever go into a leather-
and-metal phase. And because much of her poetry is about men, drinking and
down-and-outers, we
are unlikely to be facing the city's future poet laureate.
And yet it's hard to find a poet whose work is passed around prisons and
homeless shelters as, for example, her last book of verse, ``Jimmy and
Rita'' (1997), has been. ``Jimmy and Rita,'' a book that can be (and is
likely to be) read in a single hour, is a star-crossed love story set
against a backdrop of drugs, drinking, crime and homelessness.
Addonizio weaves an unsteady course between extremes: Hers is
``serious'' poetry, yes -- but popular and inclusive in a way rarely
attempted so straightforwardly and courageously. It's not dumbed-
down advertising slogans or easy-listening haiku. Nor is her work trendy or
gimmicky, though it's astonishingly readable and compelling. The dominant
mode of ``Tell Me'' features long, Whitmanesque lines of free verse, with a
smattering of sonnets, blank verse, pantoums and that much-abused genre, the
prose poem. Which way is she jumping? Hard to tell.
Except, always, into deeper water. Passing emotions lead quickly,
relentlessly, to timeless ones. For
example, in ``Physics'' the man dropping quarters into a slot to see a naked
woman is suddenly troubled by a vision of the atom. The atom, the size of
the Earth, has electrons inside it as big as cherries, one ``sitting on an
ice floe in the Antarctic, a pinprick/ of blood, and another in a village in
north Africa/being rolled on the tongue of a dusty child.''
In the speed of an Addonizio synapse, a couple brawling on the streets
of San Francisco quickly becomes a nightmare of emotional association and
involvement in ``Collapsing Poem''; the memory of lost love dissolves into a
barroom scene in ``Beginning With His Body and Ending in a Small Town''; in
the delightful ``Aliens,'' sex with a new lover brings the thought that her
body has been taken over by aliens, come to Earth to explore pleasure.
Addonizio doesn't piggyback on the usual truckload of cultural,
historical and literary associations, the instant pudding of academic
poetry. Similarly, her earlier mixed-bag career (as waitress, bookkeeper for
an auto parts shop, attendant for the disabled and portrait photographer,
among other employment) may have taught her to use simple, primary words to
make her profound points and reach her everyman audience.
Her poems are more likely to be inspired by late-night reruns and bars like
the Embers than by a recent rereading of Ovid or Milton. An occasional
exception is the sly reference to Freud in the poem ``What Do Women Want?''
Addonizio replies in her brassy first line:
I want a red dress.
I want it flimsy and cheap,
I want it too tight . . .
She proceeds to her triumphant finish:
and I'll wear it like bones, like
skin,
it'll be the goddamned
dress they bury me in.
A brassy C Major is one of Addonizio's favorite keys, and it
serves her as well as her more melancholy notes. In ``Good Girl,'' the
narrator urges the abstemious friend to cut loose, comparing her to a dog
``always groveling for love and begging to be petted. . . . You've rolled over
long enough.'' She concludes:
. . . At the end of all this
there's one lousy biscuit, and
it tastes like dirt.
So get going. Listen, they're
howling for you now:
up and down the block your
neighbors' dogs
burst into frenzied barking
and won't shut up.
This stuff, although powerful, can veer toward shtick. Addonizio has
developed a marketable persona that she will inevitably soft-pedal as she
goes forward. This is especially tricky, because she does this shtick so
well, with her striking looks and get-ups and the dramatically appealing
persona she presents at readings.
It will be interesting, then, to look forward to future Addonizio
volumes, as this mid-40s poet mellows. Already, we see more somber notes in
``Getting Older,'' a with-it update echoing Millay's famous sonnet, ``What
lips my lips have kissed, and where, and why.'' Or in her pantoum, ``The
Revered Poet Instructs Her Students on the Importance of Revision,'' in
which the narrator moves from the pain of revision to the agony of creation,
and finally to her own passing life: ``listen, I was a beautiful woman,/you
think I want to be standing here, lecturing? Look again./ Listen. I'm trying
to tell you.''
Addonizio's recognition is growing, and she has already been the
recipient of two NEA Fellowships and a Pushcart Prize, among other honors.
The last few pages of ``Tell Me'' show that most of the poems have been
published elsewhere, in publications ranging erratically from the
prestigious Threepenny Review and American Poetry Review to the Bastard
Review, and they've been included in a surprising number of anthologies.
Whatever the future brings for Addonizio, it's a good bet that she
will continue to defy easy categorization. Others have tried: The Washington
Post called her ``an inspired mix of Camille Paglia and Edna St. Vincent
Millay.''
Yes, kind of. Well . . . that's not quite it, either.
Cynthia Haven has written most recently for Philadelphia magazine and Stanford magazine.