THE THRONE OF LABDACUS
By Gjertrud Schnackenberg
Farrar, Straus & Giroux; 101 pages; $23
SUPERNATURAL LOVE
Poems 1976-1992
By Gjertrud Schnackenberg
Farrar, Straus & Giroux; 278 pages; $19 paperback
The unlikely name Gjertrud Schnackenberg, completely unrecognized outside
mandarin poetry circles, belongs to one of the most gifted poets of our
time.
The book that made her reputation, 1985's ``The Lamplit Answer,'' led
Nadine Gordimer to rave that her poems ``move me in a way that I don't
really think I have experienced since I first read Rilke at sixteen or
seventeen.'' That quote has been dusted off and pressed into service for
Schnackenberg's latest book, ``The Throne of Labdacus,'' issued
simultaneously with her collected poems, ``Supernatural Love.''
The title poem of the collected edition, as well as the phrase ``lamplit
answer,'' were both taken from a spectacular poem in rhyming tercets,
a knockout punch in a landmark book. And some will never forget
Schnackenberg's metaphysical, mysterious ``Heavenly Feast,'' which the New
Yorker first published in the early '80s, commemorating in tight, iambic
trimeter writer Simone Weil's death by starvation. Though there were a few
weaker notes in ``The Lamplit Answer'' (Schnackenberg has always tended to
wander a bit), the best were stunning. So the next book was awaited eagerly.
In 1992 she came out with ``A Gilded Lapse of Time,'' in which magical
image succeeds magical image in rambling, free-
verse lines about masks of bees, mosaics of gold, dripping honeycombs and
the gilded apse of celestial globes. Reading it is like eating a dozen
profiteroles at once. Each image was dazzling; few had a discernible point.
In the dense excess the mind wandered, looking for something crisp,
succinct, something that did not drift from line to line.
Too often, though, every footnote in ``A Gilded Lapse of Time'' was
needed to get a grip on the otherwise incomprehensible associ
ations in the poems. But the dreamy, learned blowsiness seemed excusable,
given the subject of Paradise and divinity. One hoped ``A Gilded Lapse'' was
only a breathtaking experimental one-off. So, again, the next book was
eagerly awaited.
Now there's ``The Throne of Labdacus'':
the story of Oedipus, austerely developed in unmetrical couplets.
Small ideas are overworked (for example, the ``small sound'' in the opening
chapter, which has unintended comic overtones associated with a housefly
``stamping its foot''); large ideas arrive late and redeem too little. ``The
Throne of Labdacus'' feels spun out through redundant abstraction and
needless
gloss. This is ironic given the precision and tension of Sophocles' play,
which is still urgent and immediate after two millennia.
The climactic incident arrives somewhere in the middle: The crime of
Oedipus is so horrible (``even the god will be frightened'') that the god
Apollo was forced to invent the Greek alphabet to describe it. But the
horror of Oedipus' crime has been dulled by centuries of retelling and
certainly can't compete with the headlines at the checkout counter. In fact,
given the amount of incest among the Olympians (Zeus was Hera's brother,
right?), surely even they wouldn't stifle a yawn. So Schnackenberg's horror
is another threadbare convention rather than a fresh, dramatic force for her
verse.
That's one reason a sense of inauthenticity pervades. It's the ``watch me
watching the sunset'' syndrome, and one cannot help suspecting that
Schnackenberg is using Sophocles as a prop, the way her paraphrasing of
various passages in the ``Paradiso'' often lent an artificial strength to
``A Gilded Lapse of Time.''
It's fashionable in many quarters to point out how a great or near-
great poet was ``harmed'' by formal structure in poetry. But in
Schnackenberg's case, meter reined in her excesses and ordered her
pandemonium of literary, historical and religious allusions. Plus, she had
an extraordinary dexterity and inventiveness in form. It's missed.
Don't misunderstand. Like its predecessor, ``The Throne of Labdacus'' is
unquestionably intelligent, thematically mature and beautifully envisioned.
But overall the verse is weaker and uncompelling, even a little dull. Many
will read it with a self-righteous sense of aesthetic duty rather than
lively pleasure. We can only hope this isn't a woman with a brilliant future
behind her.
In any case, the plaudits will continue to fall on her in a shower of
gold, for Schnackenberg is something of a darling in the East Coast literary
world and still a very gifted poet. But ``Supernatural Love'' is a revealing
chronology, and a better buy in paperback than the new ``Throne of
Labdacus'' in hardcover.
Cynthia Haven is a regular contributor to the Cortland Review.
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